Who am I? I am a 20 years old guy I study the B.A. in English Language Teaching at the UAA. I have had a lot of experiences in my life, as for example the friends I make in my childhood, or the friends I met in my youth while I was in high school. Also, there are a lot of things I like as the music I listen to and the TV shows I saw, which have a lot of influence on my behavior.
First of all, I am going to talk about my childhood, a stage in my life where I could meet some friends at school, and out of school. I spent the early years of my childhood playing with my neighbors, we used to go to the street and play soccer for a while. It did not matter if you were a boy or a girl, you were able to play with us. After playing soccer we use to go for some drinks to the store, place where we used to talk about the things we did in school, or about cartoons, mainly about Dragon Ball Z. Suddenly, I changed my neighbors friendship for my classmates, we all did it, and we did the same things, the same games, but now with other friends
Next is my Youth. It started when I turned 13 years old, I met new friends at junior high school, but since they lived far away from my home, I went out with just one friend, we used to go to play videogames. There I met some new friends, and I started to like music, mainly the Industrial and Thrash metal. My new friends fans of videogames were kind of weird, and more even when we got into High School we used to go to some metal bands concerts, where we always got into fights because of alcohol.
The last point is about the Music and TV shows I like. I like a lot of bands of many different genres, but I love mainly Grind Metal, with bands such as, Napalm Death, C.B.T., Last Days of Humanity and Torture Killer. I like them because they are brutal music, reason why they do not share place with the mainstream bands that only make music to make money. TV shows I like are mainly cartoons. My favorite one is The Ren & Stimpy Show, that cartoon inspired me to make drawings with the same sense of humor that the show had, based in the grotesque things. Other shows that like me are: Hey Arnold!, it reminds me to my friends of childhood, Invader Zim reminds me to the friends of my Youth, and Malcolm in the Middle reminds me to some people of my family. I can say that I base my favorite things on those shows that make me remember the stages I have lived, I am a wistful person.
As conclusion, I can say that I am a normal person, with a normal Childhood, a normal Youth, and a normal life, that sometimes bases his likes as music and TV shows on what can make him remember all his life.
Hi collazo!!well I think your essay is clear, but in my very personal point of view if you talked about childhood and youth maybe you were talked more about the present, because in the fourth body paragraph you emphazised your likes and dislikes, and I as a reader thougth that your essay included more information about your present.You did a good job!!:)
ResponderEliminarHello Collazo, I liked your essay, but I think you have some mistakes such as in the first paragraph you wrote: as for example, I think is better if you wrote such as. Also I think you should talk about some other things of your childhood, or your youth because in both you are talking about your friends and I think this could be a little bit tedious.
ResponderEliminaranother thing is that you should try to make the pragraphs of the same size.